实用英语写作授课教案第五次.DOC

实用英语写作： 授课教案 第六次?授课章节?英语写作基础知识 第六讲?授课主体教师+学生周数第6周?学时数?2?课? 题The Sentence IIIHow to Make a Beautiful Sentence教学目的及要求To master the four principles for English sentence writing.1. Completeness2. Unity3. Coherence4. Variety教学内容要点1. Completeness2. Unity3. Coherence4. Variety重难点分析CoherenceVariety???教学思路或教法设计???I. Revision: the members of English sentence and the basic sentence patternsII. Warming-up practice: III.? Presentation （讲授：教师+学生）1. Completeness2. Unity3. Coherence4. VarietyV. Comments and Conclusion （评价及结论）VI. Assignment （作业）To correct the mistakes in the last homework, Chinese Learning Fever in the World and rewrite it. Mechanic of English writing VI. Revision: the members of English sentence and the basic sentence patternsII. Warming-up practice: 一篇好的文章自然离不开好的句子，而写好句子包括两方面：一是语法正确，二是修辞得体。中国的学生，往往按照说中文的方式组织英文句子，造成语法错误和修辞错误。例如：（1）Tom with his elder brother, both looking very excited, were very, very talkative that night. （主谓不一致） （2）Hello, Paul, I don’t expect to meet you here. （时态有错误） （3）Fish were toasted by the boys on the end of long pointed sticks.（修辞不当，容易产生歧义）（4）He will be here tomorrow afternoon is certain. （主语从句缺少引导词that，或是is certain 多余）可见，写好一个句子并不简单，要注意很多方面。III. PresentationCompletenessCompleteness of sentence elementsEg: Faulty: Although he does nothing to improve them. Revised: He is always complaining about his grades, although he does nothing to improve them.2) Faulty: Women should be equal with men has always been a much controversial issue. Revised: Whether women should be equal with men has always been a much controversial issue.Completeness of sentence contentsEg:1) Faulty: My hometown is closer to Nanjing. Revised: My hometown is closer to Nanjing than to Shanghai/2) Faulty: An ideal family should be a place. Revised: An ideal family should be a place where we can get warmth, help, comfort and strength.Unity Unity is the first quality of an effective sentence. — a single complete thought1) Faulty: Born i