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初中英语八年级下册第三单元写作指导　　八年级下册第三单元写作指导　　黑龙江省绥棱双岔河中学　李传雨　　1. 写作任务：　　下面是Tom在上个星期日的各个时间段所做的事情的记录。请根据这些信息，以Toms Sunday为题写一篇文章。要求：（1）句子通顺，条理清楚；（2）要将提示内容全部体现在文章当中。字数不少于60词。　　7:00 --- 7:20 have breakfast　　7:30 --- 9:00 help mother clean the room　　9:00 --- 11:00read books　　13:00 --- 15:00play soccer with friends　　15:00 --- 17:00 do homework　　17:00 --- 17:30 have supper　　18:00 --- 20:00 watch TV　　21:00 --- 21:30 keep a diary　　2．习作正文：　　Toms Sunday　　Tom was having breakfast from seven to seven twenty last Sunday. Tom was helping his mother clean the room from seven thirty to nine oclock. He was reading books from nine to eleven. He was playing soccer with friends from thirteen to fifteen. He was doing his homework from fifteen to seventeen. He was having supper from seventeen to seventeen thirty. He was watching TV from eighteen to twenty. He was keeping a diary from twenty-one to twenty-one thirty.　　3. 教师指导：　　a. 本单元的写作指导：　　本单元主要是运用过去进行时态及while和when引导的时间状语从句来谈论过去的事情。结合本单元的时态和相关文章内容，我们可以扩展出的写作题目有写某个人在过去某一时或某一时间段内的所作所为；也可以写过去的大事，例如汶川地震、世博会、奥运会等对现在的影响或你对这些大事的感受等等。　　下面我们来复习一下与本单元有关的过去进行时的基本用法，以及when和while的区别。　　（1）过去进行时的基本用法　　过去进行时表示在过去某一时刻或某一段时间内正在进行或发生的动作。这一时态当中的过去时间除了有上下文的提示以外，一般用时间状语来表示。结构为：was / were + V-ing。时间状语有last night, last Sunday, from seven to nine last night, 或者与when, while, as引导的过去时间状语连用。　　肯定句：The boy was walking down the street when the UFO landed.　　否定句：He wasnt working from eight to ten last night.　　疑问句：--- Was he cleaning his car while I was reading?　　--- Yes, he was. / No, he wasnt.　　--- What was she doing at nine oclock yesterday?　　--- She was sleeping.　　（2）when与while的区别　　when引导时间状语从句时，从句的动作和主句的动作可以是同时，也可以是先后发生，句中的动词可以是终止性动词，也可以是延续性动词；而while从句中的动词必须是延续性动词，强调主句的动作在从句动作的发生的过程中或主从句两个动作同时发生。　　如：When the teacher came in, we were talking.　　When / While we were dancing, a stranger came in．　　 When / While she was watching TV, I was watching TV. 　　　重要词语：　　when, while, experience, amazing, happen, hear, take place, recent, as ... as, became,