PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评作者.docVIP

PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评 My friend and I I have a lovely friend. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. He’s 150 cm tall. I’m 148 cm. He’s taller and stronger. He’s 43 kg and I’m 41 kg. He’s heavier.My eyes are bigger and my legs are longer. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play football. On Sundays, we play basketball. He’s good at basketball. How happy we are! 【要领点评】 写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。既然写作范围是两个人物，就要笔墨均匀，两者缺一不可。不能只描写朋友，也不能只叙述我。这无形中增加了写作的难度。解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几方面