初三下作文讲评theSpringFestival.pptVIP

初三下作文讲评一 About the Spring Festival 开学测试作文 春节是中国最重要的节日。人们通常有7天假期，家人团聚，互相拜访亲朋好友。小孩子能得到压岁钱和新衣服，还能放鞭炮。春节是个快乐的节日。请简单谈谈中国的春节，并谈谈你家是如何过春节的？春节期间你都做了些什么高兴事？ 提示词语：New Year’s Eve （除夕）；get together; relative（亲戚）; ；New Year’s money (压岁钱)； set off firework(放鞭炮); 主要问题 审题不透，对要点分析不准 文章段落、层次不清 时态混乱，前后不一致 基本的语法错误多，如介词的使用；过去时态的动词形式 Correct the mistakes: 1.I’m very like the Spring Festival. 2.Everyone have new clothes. 3.We were visited the relatives got together. 4.We had lunch in there. 5.In the New Year’s Eve 6.I and my sisters went to setten off fireworks. 7.My spring festival was happy. 例文一 The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.People always get together to have big meals and visit relatives. Children can get New Year’s money , wear new clothes and set off fireworks. On this New Year’s Eve, my family stayed at home. We watched TV together and talked about the happy things all around the year.My father cooked a lot of delicious food for us, and we all enjoyed ourselves very much. During the Spring Festival, we did a lot of things. On the first day, we went to visit my grandparents. They were very happy to see us. I did some cleaning for my grandparents and then they gave me the New Year’s money.On the second day ,my mother took me to a bookstore. I bought many books that I liked so much.In the evenings ,I set off fireworks with my father. The fireworks looked so beautiful in the sky. These were the happy things which I did during the Spring Festival. I had a happy time with my family. I love the Spring Festival. 例文二 The Spring Festival is one of the most important festivals in China. People in China are all looking forward to it every year.We have a 7-day vacation during the festival. Families will get together on the New Year’s Eve and eat dumplings together. People visit their relatives and friends,kids will get New Year’s money and new clothes. The most interesting thing is to set off fireworks, it/ they color the night sky very beautiful. In