Unit 13 Rainy days makes me sad单元话题写作分析.docVIP

Unit 13 Rainy days makes me sad单元话题写作分析 　　Unit 13 Rainy days makes me sad 　　 　　【单元话题分析】 　　天下雨的时候，你有什么样的感受？它让你感到伤感还是浪漫？本单元的话题就是谈论感受。 　　生活中我们的心情会受到外界影响，产生各种不同的感受。谈论感受是每个人生活中离不开的话题。《英语课程标准》要求学生要学会描述和谈论自己的个人情感、感受。各类考试中也不断地涉及本话题。该话题设计的内容很广泛，可以谈论自己对各种颜色、声音的感受、对事物的喜怒哀乐的感受、天气等外界事物对自己的影响等。这样的话题贴近学生生活，是每个中学生都有亲身感受与体验的。 　　本单元话题通常采用“Guided Writing”的命题方式，渗透出现在很多话题作文中。通过对物体的描述、对事件的叙述来逐步表现自己的感受。写作时要注意结合题目选择恰当的时态，描述物体或讲述事件要按照一定的顺序，为一定的目的服务，以便准确的表达自己的感受。 　　【写作指导】 　　1. 写作时要仔细审题，紧扣题目中的材料，抓住题目的细节要求，不要随意发挥，偏题离题。如果题目允许适当的发挥，则发挥的部分一定要成为作文有机的构成部分，成为有效的过渡内容或补充细节内容。 　　2. 描述物体要按照一定的顺序、有条有理的进行，为表达个人感受做好铺垫，如有必要可以详细说明产生这种感受的原因。叙述事件要做到开篇点题，把时间、地点、人物等要素交代清楚，结尾要扣题，突出作文的中心思想，使个人的感受得到充分的表达。 　　3.从时态上看，该话题涉及到多种时态。一般叙述事件多用过去时，而像描述天气、声音和颜色等自己的影响时则常用一般现在时。时态的选择应针对写作材料灵活应用。 　　【佳篇欣赏】A 　　I live in a noisy neighborhood near the market. At half past five every morning, the shouts from the market will wake me up. Because it is too early, I always feel sleepy at school. When the teacher asks me questions, I don’t know what to do. Then my classmates would laugh at me. It makes me really angry. 　　It’s ok during the lunchtime. But the neighborhood will become noisy again at night. A young boy near my house is learning to play the violin. He is just a beginner. I think you can imagine how terrible his music is. It is so unpleasant and loud that it makes me feel tense. I can’t concentrate on my schoolwork. 　　I feel really frustrated. I hope I can move to somewhere quite some day.B 　　My friend Lin Ling moved to a new house. Yesterday he invited us to have a look at his new bedroom. The house is very beautiful. There is one living room and two bedrooms. The living room is bright light green. I like it very much. Because green makes people relaxed, and it is good for eyes. Lin Ling’s bedroom is yellow. It’s my favorite color. It makes people feel happy. I think it must be comfortable to do homework in a yellow bedroom. He has a very lovely small