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Unit 14 Have you packed yet?单元话题写作分析 　　Unit 14 Have you packed yet? 　　【单元话题分析】 　　与朋友聊天时， 难免要说道最近发生的事或自己最近所做的事情。本单元的话题就是最近发生的事情。 　　《英语课程标准》要求学生掌握描述事件发生、发展的过程的表达方式。这个话题也是记叙文写作考察的重点之一。它涉及的内容比较广泛，可以谈论为外出旅行等活动所做的准备，可以谈论最近发生在身边的一件事及其影响，也可以用看来谈论身边的新事物。这个话题是和每一位同学的生活和经历紧密相关的。在讲述事情的过程中，同学们还可以发表自己的看法，进行评论。 　　该话题的命题形式有多样，通常采用 “Guided writing”形式，有中、英文提示。通常采用记叙或描述性话题作文形式，常常用到书信、日记等形式。 　　写作时要重点突出，顺序清楚。由于本话题涉及的时态较多，如现在完成时、现在完成进行时、一般过去时、一般现在时等，要根据记叙内容的需要，选择恰当的时态。 　　【写作指导】 　　1. 从时态上分析，因为谈论的是最近发生的事情及其影响，故大多数情况要使用一般过去时和现在完成时描述事件。如果强调从过去某时开始一直延续到说话时还在进行的动作，或可能还要继续下去的动作，就要用现在完成进行时。它通常和“for+段时间”或“since+点时间(也可以是从句)”的时间状语连用。若涉及到经常发生的事情，则用一般现在时；目前正在发生的事就用现在进行时。 　　2. 从内容上分析是在叙述事件，因此要围绕其要点展开叙述，与此相关的时间、 人物、事件、原因、结果等等需要的时候要交代清楚。 　　3. 叙事注意条理性，先说什么后说什么，句子可以加一些连接词如：and, then, because, so, if, since和when引导的从句等，以加强意思的前后衔接和转折。 　　【佳篇欣赏】A 　　Summer holiday is coming to the end. The holiday is really wonderful. I have done many things. I have been to Hong Kong with my father. The journey was exciting. I can’t forget the Disneyland and the Toy Street. They are good places for children and teenagers to go. I have been going swimming every afternoon recently. It’s a good way to keep fit, and it keeps me cool in the hot days. 　　Although the holiday is wonderful, there is one thing I have to worry about. I haven’t finished my homework for the holiday. I must hurry up to do it.B 　　Great changes have taken place in my school. There used to be no library. Students didn’t have enough reading materials at school. Now our school has built a big library. There are many new books, and every student can borrow books from the library. Our school also has built a new computer room. We can surf the Internet there. We now have computer class every week. It is very interesting. The computers in the classroom are also connected to the Internet. It makes teaching very convenient and fun. 　　We all like to study here, and I am sure will make great prog