初中英语作文写作课件初中教育精选.pptVIP

初中教育精选 中学教育精选 初中教育精选 中学教育精选 中考英语 作文训练 ——孙士平 * 老师教学目标/学生学习目标 1 培养学生写作兴趣 2 提高学生写作能力 A 基础稍差的学生学会写简单句 B 中等生句子通顺、行文连惯。 少量错误。 C 优生学会应用丰富的语言结构 和词汇、语法正确。 * 中考英语作文评分标准 一档13—15 分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇、准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连惯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力（从句，短语等）。 二档10—12分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。 三档7—9 分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。 四档4—6 分 只包含了少数要点，语言表达不规范句子无条理，行文不连惯，语言错误严重，影响理解。 五档0—3 分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多。 * 易错点分析 My favorite subject is English. I good at English ,too. My favorite hobby is playing football. The best student in my class. (佟) I looks tall and thin. I’m looks like is very tall and thin.(陈) I’m appearance is very tall. I’m study English over five years.(范，王）I’m must to help he.(陈) I have studyed English over five years .My hobby is reading ,drawing and playing the piano.(曹) I’m a outgoing and easygoing boy. I’m going to be a English teacher. (闫) There are lots of students want to make friends with me.(史) * * * * * * * * * 易错点归纳 1 不一致（主谓 数 时态 代词） 2 修饰语错位。 3 句子不完整。 4 句子的短语与后面句子逻辑关系混乱不清 5 词性误用 6 指代不清 7 间断句子 8 措辞问题 9 累赘 10 不连贯 11综合性语言错误（时态 语态标点符号 大小写等） * Name Ma Xiaotiao Age 15 Look tall，thin，black hair, wear shorts and a T-shirt Favorite food hamburgers，fried chicken Favorite classes science, art, PE Things he likes little animals Things he likes to do play with his good friends, help others Character (性格) kind-hearted（善良的）, polite (有礼貌的) 5. Writing task: 根据表格所提供的信息写一篇短文，描述你的好朋友马小跳，80个左右的单词, 开头已经给出。 开头： Ma Xiaotiao is my good friend. He… * 10. 例文: Ma Xiaotiao is my good friend. He is 15 years old. He is tall and thin. He has black hair and he likes wearing shorts and T-shirts. He looks very cute. He likes hamburgers and fried chicken best. His favorite classes are science, art and P.E. He likes little animals. He often plays with his good friends at school and helps others who are in need. He is very polite and kind-hearted. He is a good boy. I like him very much. * 描述外貌的单词： short