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7.2 实战举例 例题1 来源：c6t3 The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 分析： 本题实际上是两个流程图，一个描述了蚕的周期变化，另一个描述了蚕茧如何做成丝绸/丝 1 布，当然两个图有一定的联系。 流程图的写作要注意以下事项： 第一， 找到流程起点，按照箭头方向，仔细看图，理解图意； 第二， 如果出现生词，结合图中信息进行猜测，多数生词可以直接代入； 第三， 按图中步骤、分阶段进行描述，不要省略其中环节； 第四， 一定要使用表示逻辑顺序的衔接词； 第五， 通常选用一般现在时，注意主谓一致，注意适当使用被动语态； 如此来说，我们可以动手来写这篇作文了，但你会发现两个基本问题：第一，写出来的句子 简单句居多，句型单一，句间关系松散；第二，衔接词贫乏。这应该是流程图写作中的两个 难点。 我们先来看考官范文，然后进行详细总结。 The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again. The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk clith. Once selected, they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 900 metres long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage. Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process. 163 words 考官作文已经很好的解决了刚才我们提到的两个问题，下划线部分已经给我们了很多启示。 现总结如下： 首先，流程图中最关键的是使用恰当衔接手段，一方面增强文章连贯性，另一方面，可以 避免写太多的简单句，使句间的语法关系增强。 表示时间顺序 1) first; first of all; in the first/initial stage; second; next; then; afterwards; thereafter; finally; at the same time; simultaneously; meanw hile;——全为副词（或短语）， 虽是简单，却可增强逻辑，有效衔接！ 2) and; and then; ——写出并列句：把句子写长最经济有效的方法！