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Life-in-the-future-作文点评

Life in the future;作文评分标准;Title(题目);Outline (提纲);Out line;Opening (开头段);Opening (开头段);议论文开头; Main Body(文章主体);Main Body(文章主体); Ten years from now, I already got my Bachelor’s degree and I’m already a licensed Certified Public Accountant. I worked as an independent accountant in an accounting firm for two years. I passed the civil service exam when I decided to work professionally as an external auditor for the government for almost four years. That is when I decided to put up my own business. After another four years, I achieved my fulfillment on being a successful career woman, running a business of my own. The business grows, it gains profit until it’s enough for me to build my dream house. ;Enough for me, my mama, papa, brother and sister to live. I made my brother and sister finish their studies. I don’t decide on having my own family yet. I’m happy traveling all around the globe, with my soul sisters whom I‘m sharing the same dreams. I wanted to explore more thoroughly the different aspect of life until such time that I will meet and marry the man that God destined for me to be with and build our own family. ;Ending (结尾);Good expressions;Good expressions;范文参考; In the future, there are more and more kinds of food we can choose. They will be much more delicious than now. They will not be expensive. We can buy them with little money. Isnt it wonderful?? ???? In the future, all of us will live in beautiful houses. It can move anywhere. When we want to change the place we live, it will take us quickly without any trouble.? ????; In the future, we wont have to go to work by bus or bike. Everyone will have a small but useful plane, we can go anywhere we like by plane. How great will be !? ???? In the future, maybe each family will have a robot. Our mother wont be busy at housework, they wont be tired. When we feel bad, we wont have to go to hospital to see a doctor. The teachers wont need to go to school to work because they can teach students through World W

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