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My Opinion on Campus Love ①People have different opinions on campus love. ②Some people are strongly against it. ③Some people think it is very natural and can be understood. 改写提示： 要得高分，作文开头要好，好的开头是成功的一半。阅卷老师往往根据第一段确定文章的分数档次，如果开头就出现不同凡响的句子，提高分数很有用。 方法：①句太平淡，要谈论的是是否支持campus love,我们可以加入表示（当谈论到是否提倡/支持…）的亮点结构“when it comes to whether…should be advocated” ， “People have different opinions on” “人们看法不一”，可以用句型there is no agreement among people，把简单句变成复合句。 效果：句子层次提升，出现亮点，变成高分句。 ①When it comes to whether campus love should be advocated, there is no agreement among people. （句子意思：当谈到是否提倡校园爱情，人们看法不一。） 句型练习： When it comes to whether …should be advocated, there is no agreement among people. “当谈到是否提倡…，人们看法不一。” 练习：当谈到是否提倡跳槽（job-hopping）， 人们看法不一。 When it comes to whether job-hopping should be advocated, there is no agreement among people. 题目：My Opinion on One-child Policy 1. 有些人支持独生子女政策，有些人却反对 2. 你的观点和理由 如何写？ 套用亮点句式 ①When it comes to whether One-child Policy should be advocated, there is no agreement among people. ②Some people are strongly against it. ③Some people think it is very natural and can be understood. 改写提示： 2.1使用过渡性词语。 ②③句说明两种观点，有“对比”的关系，所以用表“对比” 的衔接词while将②③句合成一句。这样衔接更加紧密，意义更加连贯。 2.2用others 替换第二个people,避免重复。 2.3 用hold the view that替换“六大恶心词汇之一”的“think” 2.3使用平行结构。“can be understood”替换成“understandable”使句子变成平行结构，更加简洁，语势更强. ? 过渡性词语：英语中十分重视句与句之间的衔接，即使上下句之间意义联系紧密，逻辑关系很明显，也不能省略连接词或过渡词，否则就不符合英语 的思维与表达习惯。使用连接词使句与句之间衔接更加紧密，意义更加连贯。 将原句②Some people are strongly against it. ③Some people think it is very natural and can be understood. 改写如下： ②Some people are strongly against it while others hold the view that it is quite natural and understandable. 总结： 四级作文高分策略：设计亮点 亮点句子 When it comes to whether …should be advocated, there is no agreement among people. “当谈到是否提倡…，人们看法不一。” 亮点词语 衔接词 while(而)，表示对比 避免重复，用others替换重复词 hold the view that 替换think 1 1 1 1 例如： 题目：My Opinion on Campus Love 1.有些人支持校园爱情，有些人却反对 2.你的观点和理由 第一段： ①People have differ