汉英句子翻译第二节.ppt

举例3 我常常遗憾我家门前的那块丑石呢:它黑黝黝地卧在那里，牛似的模样;谁也不知道是什么时候留在这里的，谁也不去理会它。只是麦收时节，门前摊了麦子，奶奶总是要说:这块丑石，多碍地面哟，多时把它搬走吧。（五分钟时间理思路） 分析： 我常常遗憾我家门前的那块丑石呢:它黑黝黝地卧在那里，牛似的模样;谁也不知道是什么时候留在这里的，谁也不去理会它。只是麦收时节，门前摊了麦子，奶奶总是要说:这块丑石，多碍地面哟，多时把它搬走吧。 分析： 我常常遗憾我家门前的那块丑石呢:它黑黝黝地卧在那里，牛似的模样;谁也不知道是什么时候留在这里的，谁也不去理会它。只是麦收时节，门前摊了麦子，奶奶总是要说:这块丑石，多碍地面哟，多时把它搬走吧。 直译：I used to be sorry for the ugly stone in front of our door. It is black and looks like an ox. Nobody knew when it was left there and paid any attention to it. Only when the season for harvesting wheat arrived and the grains of the wheat were spread over the ground beyond the door, would my grandma always say: “look at this ugly stone! It takes so much space. And someday it will be moved away.” 参考译文 我常常遗憾我家门前的那块丑石呢:它黑黝黝地卧在那里，牛似的模样;谁也不知道是什么时候留在这里的，谁也不去理会它。只是麦收时节，门前摊了麦子，奶奶总是要说:这块丑石，多碍地面哟，多时把它搬走吧。 I used to feel sorry for that ugly black piece of stone lying like an ox in front of our door; none knew when it was left there and none paid any attention to it，except at the time when wheat was harvested and my grandma，seeing the grains of wheat spread all over the ground in the front yard of the house，would grumble: “This ugly stone takes so much space. Move it away someday.” 3. 信息焦点:找准主语 英语主谓宾的基本结构 英语主语的构成：名词；动名词；不定式；形式主语 主语选定 例一：看到这惨状，大家立即陷入了恐慌。 1. On seeing this miserable scene, people got panic-stricken very soon. 2. At the sight of this miserable scene, people was seized with panic/overwhelmed by panic/great terror, or people were thrown in panic. 3. The sight of this miserable scene threw people in panic. 看到这惨状，大家立即陷入了恐慌，有人甚至有了撤退的心思。 原文思路： 1. 改写为欧化中文：大家如此惊慌以致于…… (so…that such… that) 2. 理清逻辑：整体与部分（大家---有人） 译文一 看到这惨状，大家立即陷入了恐慌，有人甚至有了打退堂鼓的心思。 The sight of the miserable scene threw people into such a panic that some of them even had the idea of making a retreat. The sight of the miserable scene made people so panic-stricken that some of them even conceived of/entertained the idea of making a retreat. 译文二 看到这惨状，大家立即陷入了恐慌，有人甚至有了打退堂鼓的心思。 The sight of the mi