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常见错误(句子表达) 1. Shaolin Temple at the foot of Songshan mountain. 2. Shaolin Temple in Dengfeng city of Henan province. 病句问题：无谓语动词 正确句子：Shaolin Temple _________________at the foot of Songshan mountain. is / is located at 常见错误(句子表达) 3. Shaolin Temple, which is surrounded with forests and hills. 4. Shaolin Temple, which is located in Dengfeng city of Henan province. 病句问题：无主句，就无从句。 正确句子：见10班佳句欣赏。 常见错误(句子表达) 5. Henan has very good weather is fit for travel. 病句问题：一个简单句中两个谓语动词，之间又无连词连接，又不是从句，则为病句。 正确句子： (加连词)Henan has very good weather and is fit for travel. (变从句)Henan has very good weather, which is fit for travel. 常见错误(句子表达) 5. Henan has very good weather is fit for travel. 正确句子： (用with结构) With very good weather, Henan is fit for travel. (it形式宾语)The good weather there makes it fit for tourists to travel in Henan. 表达升级 1. 少林寺(1)位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 普通版： Shaolin Temple was located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, in Dengfeng city of Henan province. It was built in 495 AD in the Northern Wei Dynasty. It was famous for the Shaolin Kung Fu. 表达升级 1. 少林寺 (1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 升级版： Located at the foot of Songshan Mountain, Shaolin Temple was famous for its Shanolin Kungfu. (非谓语结构巧结合) 表达升级 少林寺(1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 升级版： Shaolin temple was built in 495 AD, so it has a long history. Built in 495 AD in the Northern Wei Dynasty, Shaolin temple has a long history. 丰富内容加从句 表达升级 少林寺(1) 位于河南省登封市嵩山脚下;(2)建于公元495年(495A.D.)的北魏;(3) 少林功夫名扬天下。 升级版： What attracts tourists all over the world is Shaolin Kung fu. 丰富表达加从句 表达升级 2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。 普通版： The weather there is pleasant and the transportation is convenient. 表达升级 2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。 升级版： Not only is the weather pleasant, but also the transportation is convenient. 并列结构运用not only..but also倒装 表达升级 2. 其它信息:气候适宜；交通方便。 升级版： With the pleasant weather and convenient transportation, you can enjoy a wonderful trip there. 10班佳句欣