高中英语作文--如何写建议信.ppt

★没有逻辑， 东一榔头，西一棒槌。 ★时间，时刻的表达不准确。 ★没有使用我提供的句式和短语，而自己又没有正确表达的能力。 ★鉴于上面的问题，我们要做到：每篇作文审题，之后理顺思路 ; 用学过的熟悉的能正确使用的短语和句式。 具体的表达问题： … my uncle is tall and wearing a pair of glasses . He will arrive at 12:30 am on August 6th I would be appreciate if you can meet him at the airport . My uncle is tall and wears …. I would be grateful if you can… I would appreciate it if you can ….. 首段：针对对方对自己的信任简单表示感 谢，也可以表明自己的诚意。 中段：围绕对方的困惑、烦恼等问题，结 构清晰，用语科学的提出建议，注 意充分考虑到对方的实际问题，表达 选择得体用语，切忌生硬牵强泛泛而谈。 尾段：简单的寄予希望，希望自己的建议 能对对方有所帮助 开头常用句式： ★ I am sorry that you are having trouble /difficulty /problems in making friends. ★ I know you are having trouble with ... ★ I am glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on … ★ However ,the situation is easy to change if you take my advice… ★ Here are some tips to help you . ★ I think you can make it if you follow the advice below . 2.表达建议常用句式： ★ Firstly , why not do… ? If you do this , you will… ★ Secondly, you should /can do …. Then / That way you will do … ★ Thirdly , it would be a good idea if you do … By doing this ,you can do… ★ Last but not least ... ★ As far as know I am concerned , you’d better do … ★ In my opinion , you can do … 3建议信结尾常用句式： ★ I hope you will find these ideas useful . ★ As things goes on , people will do … ★ I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful … ★ I believe that if you follow my advice ,you will do … ★ I believe , with your determination , you can manage to do …