四六级写作精讲.pptVIP

problems in our writing (1). 结构：看不出清楚的三部分或三段 (2). 切题：没有按照三句提纲写作 (3). 表达：语言表达不清,支离破碎。 Social many people develop now at full speed throw up one job and take on another. (?) 中式英语 The story make me have some ideas. (?) We have nobody to depend on in the future. (?) There have many people. (?) …to live without their parents. (?) School is a study place. (?) money society (?) social man (?) reality story (?) 语法错误-词汇 writter Was took/tooked/taked on one hand…on another hand… firstly…the other hand… For one thing…for the other thing… to come true their different aim Make them do / let the