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高考英语写(信件)
高考英语写作
投诉信:
投诉信分为: 1. 购物不满(质量服务,退货换货)
2. 问题解决(影响利益,解决办法)
购物不满类
示例范文:
假设你是李华,两周前从某国外购物网站买了一部单反相机(SLR camera-a single lens reflex camera),收到货物后,发现有质量问题。
画质不太清楚;
操作不简单;
经常死机。
期待的解决方法:
退货退款
修理或调换。
开头:(自我介绍,交代投诉内容)
Dear Sir or Madam,
(自我介绍)My name is Li Hua, one of your customers. (交代投诉内容)I’m writing to complain about the SLR camera (I bought on your website two weeks ago), (which I consider is of inferior quality).
正文:(说明产品问题:细节拓展;层次分明)
(问题1:画质不清)What annoys me most is the low image quality. The blurry pictures it takes are far from satisfactory. (问题2:操作困难)Besides, the instructive brochure is quite complex and unreadable, thus making it difficult to operate the camera. (问题3:经常死机)What’s worse, the camera has already crashed several times since I received it.
结尾:(希望如何处理,盼望尽快答复)
(过度句,表达不满)I must say this is the most disappointing online shopping experience I have ever had. (引入责任方)I think you are responsible for saving the problem. (希望如何处理)I demanded to send it back for repair or exchange. Or else I would like to have it returned and get a refund. (盼望得到答复)I’m looking forward to your early replay.
Yours,
Li Hua
词汇梳理:
inferior
adj.
(质量等)低劣的,下等的
satisfactory
adj.
令人满意的
blurry
adj.
模糊不清的
crash
v.
崩溃,死机
demand
v.
要求,请求
refund
n./v.
退款
instructive brochure
说明书
be responsible for + doing
负有……的责任
…, thus doing…
因此,所以
or else
否则,要不人
常见句型梳理:
投诉内容
I am writing to you about … which I received/bought…
I am going to complain about…
I am sorry to have to return with this letter … which I received/bought…
投诉原因
When I checked…, I noticed…
When I took … out of the bag and examined … closely, I found…
When I unpacked … and tried to use it, it did not work…
希望结果
Please let me know what you intend to do in this matter.
I am returning … under separate post and look forward to receiving a full refund of…
In view of the inconvenience that this has caused, I feel you should…
问题类
示例范文:
假设你是李华,请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映你校食堂存在的问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。
菜价昂贵,菜式单一
排队时间长,浪费午休时间
味道不佳,浪费现象严重
开头:(自我介绍,投诉内容目
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