写作技法点拨系列 1.4.ppt

四、变化词汇词性, 彰显写作实力 【技巧点拨】 　　提升作文的整体水平可以在“变化”上做文章——即通过对文章所用的词、词组和句式等做变化, 来增加文章的表现力、彰显作者的写作实力水平, 以争取达到提高英语作文得分的目的。 Ⅰ. 变初级词汇为高级词汇 　　平时注意积累词汇, 在写作文时, 养成好习惯, 即脑海中第一个出现的生词, 不要使用, 因为脑海中第一个出现的词, 往往是高频词, 往往也是大家都会使用的词, 多属于初级词汇, 这样的词不会给作文增彩。逼自己多思考一下, 想一想该词的同义词、该词的高级词汇。例如: nowadays=currently, usually=normally, only= unique, stop=cease, part=component, result= consequence, obvious=apparent, quite=fairly, whole= entire, careful=cautious, ability=capacity/capability等。一篇100词左右的英语作文中, 这样的高级词汇适当地使用一些, 就会给文章增彩! 【考题再现】 ①(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)Any student who is interested is welcome to __________(take part). 欢迎任何有兴趣的同学参加。 participate ②(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and _____(choose)books. 我们可以早点出发, 那样我们就有更多的时间去阅读 和挑选书籍。 select Ⅱ. 变化所用词的词性 　　在作文中, 可以通过改变一个词的词性, 从而使得文章富有变化, 也能从一个侧面让阅卷者感受到考生对于词汇各种用法的较高掌握水平。常见的变化词性的策略有名词变动词, 动词变名词, 形容词变名词等。 (1)名词变动词 People are concerned about the gradual disappearance of the traditional values. →People are concerned because the traditional values are gradually disappearing. 传统价值正在渐渐地消亡, 这让人们很担忧。 (2)动词变名词 After watching his performance, I found he could really dance very well. →After watching his performance, I found him a really good dancer. 看了他的表演之后, 我发现他跳舞真得很棒。 (3)形容词变名词 I wrote a letter to Tom to thank him for his being so kind. →I wrote a letter to Tom to thank him for his kindness. 我写信给汤姆对他的善良表示感谢。 【考题再现】 ①(2016·北京高考)In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college and to be ________ between China and the world. →In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college and ________ China and the world. 事实上, 他鼓励我在大学里学习英语专业, 以成为连接 中国与世界的一座桥梁。 a bridge to bridge ②(2014·江西高考)In senior high school, we need to keep _________ between study and relaxation. →In senior high school, we need _________ study and relaxation. 世纪金榜导学 在高中, 我们需要保持学习和放松之间的平衡。 a balance to balance Ⅲ. 变单词为短语 　　为了增加文章的变化, 还可以将一些单词变为对应的短语, 用来表达相同的意思。比如: need=be in need of; use=make use of; important=of importance; delay=put off; attend=par