张众_剑桥商务英语(BEC)高级写作.ppt

剑桥商务英语（BEC）高级写作部分 苏州新东方学校 张众 zhangzhongchina@ BEC高级考试顺序 阅读 1 hour 写作 1 hour 10 minutes 听力 口语 不存在“跨区”的可能 BEC写作考查内容 小作文：图表作文，120－140字。 大作文：任选一篇，200－250字。 A: Business Letter B: Business Report C: Business Proposal BEC写作：外在形式 语言风格：正式 VS 非正式 书写习惯：齐头式 VS 缩进式 列举方式：注重文采 VS 名词组群 深入讨论1：语言风格 BEC高级写作要用正式用语。 正式用语的几个特点： Abbreviations Numbers Colloquial English Over-used words Passive-voice vs. Active-voice The main 10 industries in my lovely hometown are light engineering, furniture-making, sugar-refining, etc. Here is the BMW project. Let us know what you think at Monday’s meeting. Please call me at Please call us at “I大于we”原则 I will be available at any time. You can contact me at your convenience. “you大于I”原则 深入讨论2：书写习惯 齐头式：每段顶格写，段间空一行。 缩进式：段首缩进5 space，段间不空行。 深入讨论3：名词组群 employee complains Complains from the employee last month, sales figure 1996, white plate, Santana BEC写作：内在思路 思路和词汇积累： 公司内部结构 在公司工作 贸易的全过程 BEC写作的总原则 Thank you for your offer by fax. We are interested in your product of Peach Series Computers. As our order is a large one, we will appreciate it if you could lower your price a little bit We look forward to your reply. 图表作文：教学结构 图表作文的类型 语言知识的积累 句子的连接 图表作文的布局谋篇 举例、探讨、练习 图表作文的类型 最常见的三种图表： Pie Line Bar 比较级 基本型：A + 动词 + 形容词或副词的比较级 + than + B 扩展型：一致性 同级比较：A + 动词 + as many/much/well + 名词或形容词 + as + B 倍数比较：twice as / three times as… 大约、远、仅 Around Roughly Approximately (approx.) well over / well under just over / just under percent / percentage ten percent of? ten percentage of? constitute / account for / represent tiny percentage; small percentage; minute percentage proportion the proportion of men to women in direct proportion / be directly proportional in inverse proportion / be inversely proportional 增加、减少 change in…by…from…to… 中国的人口在1989年是10亿，2004年中国的人口增长到了13亿，增长了30％。 increase decrease remain stable 变化程度修饰 Marked, great, considerable, quick, sudden, rapid… Slow, gradual, gentle, slight, marginal, fractional… 句子的连接：简单连接 并列 转折 递进 Like