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第五讲 让多彩作文提分层级十三循纲蹈句的“提纲作文”01典型示范02思路导航03美文输出 典型示范典型示范(2018·潍坊市高考模拟) 假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习。你计划寒假期间去当地旅行，请用英语写一封e-mail，向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。要点如下：1.旅行信息(如景点等)；2.当地特点(如食品等)；3.注意事项。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam， Im Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in New Zealand. Im writing to　________________________________________________________________________?________________________________________________________________________?________________________________________________________________________?Sincerely yours， Li Hua 思路导航审题1提纲作文的关键就是审好题，审题时应做到三定：①定体裁；②定人称；③定时态。思路导航谋篇2提纲作文虽然有简要的提纲，但只是对文章的提示和概括，我们在谋篇时要仔细研读题目信息，对提纲进行归纳整合，并适度拓展。思路导航布局3本文可分为三段：第一段：首先作自我介绍，并说明写信的目的是询问在新西兰旅行的信息；第二段：向旅行社详细询问相关的旅行信息，如旅游景点和当地特色食品等；第三段：希望对方早日回信。美文输出(提纲作文)Dear Sir or Madam， Im Li Hua，a Chinese student，studying in New Zealand. Im writing to ask for information about your agencys New Zealands travel for the coming winter vacation. My friend and I plan to travel in the country. Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes？As we know，New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these. Besides，I am interested in the local food there. How much do I have to pay for the travel？At length，are there other things I should be aware of? I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours， Li Hua