（江苏专用）2018版高考英语大一轮复习 第三部分 写作增分攻略 八 吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式课件 牛津译林版.pptVIP

* 学案八　吸引眼球的高级词汇与复杂句式 写作运用探究 写作时，如果仅局限在把内容交代清楚这一层次，只选用一些普通的词，或一律使用简单句平铺直叙，那么习作就会显得呆板、单调，没有可读性。要想写出高分作文，不仅要把要求表述清楚，而且还要尝试使用高级词汇与复杂句式。如能运用恰当，哪怕只用上一、两处，也会为习作增添色彩，给阅卷老师留下深刻的印象。 一、运用高级词汇三原则 1.标新立异 恰当地使用一些蕴含感情色彩或其他考生不容易想到的高级词汇，会彰显自己的水平。 [高考佳句] ①I’ll thank you if you think about my suggestion. →I’ll appreciate it if you take my suggestion into consi-deration.(福建高考满分作文) ②I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is important for me，so I didn’t reply to you without delay. →I received your email last week，but I am busy preparing for my final exam，which is vital for me，so I didn’t reply to you without delay.(山东高考满分作文) ③As a result the plan was a failure. →The plan turned out to be a failure.(辽宁高考标准范文) ④We’ll try our best to improve the working conditions. →We’ll spare no effort to promote the working conditions.(山东高考标准范文) 2.短语优先 写作中，要想写出“亮点”就要注意挖掘自己现存的词汇潜力，多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，会使短文内容丰富，表达更有力度，增添文采。 [高考佳句] ①To achieve one’s dream，one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. →To achieve one’s dream，one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach.(北京高考满分作文) ②What’s more，we can pour out the troubles we face，and release our pressure from different aspects. →What’s more，we can pour out the troubles we are faced with，and release our pressure from different aspects.(重庆高考满分作文) ③To tell you the truth，I don’t really like your new novel. →To tell you the truth，I really show no interest in your new novel.(湖南高考满分作文) 3.手法多样 在表达相同或相近的意思时，要尽量避免过多地使用同一个单词，用其他相应的词或短语来代替，这样能让阅卷老师感觉到你词汇量丰富。实在找不到，可以变更说法，“曲径通幽”或许会有更好的效果。 [高考佳句] ①I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.(江西高考满分作文) ②It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from the way of education of China. →It showed me that the way of education in Canada is quite different from that of China.(湖北高考满分作文) 【即时演练】 用较高级词汇代替黑体的单词