专题05 短文改错（第04期）-2019届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编 Word版含解析.docVIP

【广东省中山一中、仲元中学等七校2019届高三第二次联考】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 One Saturday morning in about 9:00, I was walking to a supermarket nearby while suddenly I heard a loud crash just about 10 meters away. I went up and find that two taxis were badly damaged, with one door of a car knock off. One driver was bleeding heavily and other was trapped in the taxi. As soon as passer-by around saw what had happened, they were all came to offer help. Soon the police and an ambulance arrived. Judging from the stopping tracks on the road, it was obviously that the two taxi drivers were driving too fast as both of them were eager to taking more passengers. I think, when travelling, it is important to obey traffic rules, because caring about others’ lives mean caring about our own lives. 【答案】1. in→at 2. while→when 3. find→found 4. knock→knocked 5.在other前and后加the 6. passer-by→passers-by 7.去掉were 8. obviously→obvious 9. taking→take 10. mean→means 【解析】 【分析】 本文是一篇记叙文。文中讲述作者看到一起两位出租车司机为带更多客人而导致发生两车相撞严重的交通事故。 第三处：时态用法错误。文中为过去发生的事情，故用一般过去时。句意：我走上去发现两辆出租车严重受损。故将find改为found。 第四处：非谓语动词用法错误。with后宾语one door of a car与knock off.之间为被动关系，故用过去分词作宾语补足语。句意：汽车的一扇门被撞掉了。故将knock改为knocked 第五处：冠词用法错误。这里特指两个司机中的另外一个，故用the other。句意：一名司机严重出血，另一名司机被困在出租车里。故在other前and后加the。 第六处：名词数用法错误。根据后句中的they可知，这里名词passer-by用复数形式。句意：附近的路人一看见所发生的，他们就都来帮忙。故将passer-by改为passers-by。 第七处：语态用法错误。句中主语they与动词came to offer help之间为主动关系，故用主动语态。句意：附近的路人一看见所发生的，他们就都来帮忙。故去掉were。 第八处：短语用法错误。短语it is/was obvious that…显然……。句意：很显然，两位出租车司机都开得太快。故将obviously改为obvious。 第九处：动词用法错误。短语be eager to do急于做某事。句意：他们都急于带更多的乘客。故将taking改为take。 第十处：主谓一致用法错误。动名词caring about others’ lives作主语，谓语动词用单数形式。句意：因为关心别人的生命就是意味着关心我们自己的生命。故将mean改为means。 【安徽省毛坦厂中学、金安中学2019届高三上学期12月联考】假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：