高考英语书面表达专题辅导-建议倡议.ppt

3. 尽量不用一次性制品, 如一次性木筷子和塑 料袋； 4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次； 5. 每周少开手机、电视一天。 [写作内容] 1. 活动背景; 2. 倡议目的; 3. 倡议内容。 Hello everyone, I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. ... I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign! [参考范文] I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. We human beings are seriously threatened by the environmental pollution, such as waste gases, dirty water and white pollution. In order to encourage all of us to save energy and protect our environment, I am going to make the following suggestions. It is suggested that we should walk or take bikes if we go out. To avoid white pollution， we can reduce the use of bottled water and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. What’s more, if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week as well as turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week, it will be of great benefit to saving energy. I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign! Li Hua [精华点评] 本文的难度在于如何合并信息点, 考生需要用三个句子覆盖五个倡议。这时通过分析, 可以发现, 绿色出行是减少废气排放; 减少使用瓶装水和一次性物品是为了减少白色污染; 手洗衣服和减少使用手机、电视机是节能, 因此考生可以把信息点按照这个逻辑分成三句, 并且做出适当的补充,如to avoid white pollution..., ...it will be of great benefit to saving energy等。 考生可以使用不同的词组表达同一个概念,使文章语言更丰富, 如表示建议, 考生既可以说make a suggestion..., 也可以用it is suggested that...; 又如“一次性(物品)”的表达, 既可以使用unrecyclable也可以用disposable表达。总之一篇好的作文, 是非常有必要在词、短语、习惯表达、过渡词和句型等方面下功夫的。 * * * * * * * 晨读：相关短语 1. protect our environment 保护我们的环境 2. the environmental pollution 环境污染 3. be of great benefit to... 对……大有好处 4. get well-prepared (for)(为……)做好充分的准备 5. take responsibility to do sth. 有责任做某事 6. the coming speech contest 即将到来的演讲比赛 7. leave/make a deep impression on 给……留下深刻的印象 8. take my suggestion into consideration 考虑我的建议 9. have the chance to do sth. 有机会做某事 10. help students improve their English 帮助学生提高英语水平 相关句式： 1. I li