英语专四作文写作辅导.pptxVIP

专四写作辅导2;内容;;;1选用具体的词 平时学习时，就要注意积累具体词，并使之成为活跃词汇。这样实战时，才能随手运用。 good food pk tasty/fresh food 原句：No one saw the bank being broken into. 优化：No one witnessed the bank being broken into. 原句：Please try our best to help this girl, help her to pass the most difficult period in life, and make her financial burden less and less. 优化：Please try our best to help this girl, help her to pass the most difficult period in life, and relieve her financial burden.;2注意区分近义词 学习时，注意区分含义的微妙差异，从而在运用时，用词恰当。 原句：Nuclear proliferation is always the top problem the participants have to discuss at this kind of meeting. →issue issue [a topic that is often discussed or argued about, especially a social or political matter that affects the interests of a lot of people]尤指社会或政治方面的〕议题；争论的问题 ?Abortion is a highly controversial issue. 堕胎是个很有争议的话题。 pk problem [a situation that causes difficulties] I’ve been having a few problems with my car.?;3学会活用不同的词性 汉语则较多使用动词、形容词，而英语中常用名词。 所以，要想地道、制造亮点，要学会多用名词 原句：After we observed them carefully and analyzed them critically, we may identify the conceptions that will actually contribute to the social development. 优化：Through careful observation and critical analysis …;;亮点词语改写练习 I’d like to make every effort to let more people know the idea that waste is disgraceful, and call on all my schoolmates to fight against waste.(用更具体的词) I’m sure you will soon find a good candidate for the position.(用更具体的词) People who are good at dealing with social relations admit their mistakes, and take their share of blame. (用介词短语改写) ;;;1.长句的用法 长句含有许多修饰语,适合表达准确而复杂的思想,解释观点或理论,描写细致的事物。 写作时,考生要注意前后句子之间是否存在联系,善于发现各简单句之间的关联,用恰当的连接方式(esp并列、从句、介词短语、非谓语动词短语)将简单句连接起来,组成准确地道的复杂长句,增加文章的气势。 原句: Natural resources are very limited. They will be exhausted in the near future. It is not true. But it becomes a major concern around the world. This is a widely accepted fact. 优化: It is widely accepted fact that there is a major concern around the world for the exhaustion of limited natural resources