【优化方案】2016高考英语(浙江专用)二轮复习课件：第二部分专题五 书面表达.pptVIP

2．表达准确，用词高级：高考评分标准中所说的“应用了较多的词汇”，是指词汇使用的多样性，如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等。由此可知，运用较高级词汇对提高书面表达的得分档次至关重要。使用高级词汇的4 大原则： (1) 具体性原则 在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起读者的共鸣。例如：当描述一个具体事物或人时，类似a nice/good man的表达让人感觉很空洞，我们可以用有个性的、具体的词描绘一个人，如kind-hearted(好心的)；generous(慷慨的；大方的)；easy-going(随和的)等。 ①I will have my own family probably with a lovely child. ②It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. (2)新颖性原则 写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗词，又要避开冷僻词汇。 ①In the coming three years，our school life will be difficult. →In the coming three years，our school life will be challenging. ②So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up，we are sure to achieve success. →So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up，we are bound to achieve success. (3)短语优先原则 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 ①Developing a good habit is also important. →Developing a good habit is also of importance. ②As the number of English learners is increasing，it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. →As the number of English learners is on the rise，it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. ③I was going to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly. →I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car，which drove off quickly. (4)避免重复原则 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。 ①I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. →I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. ②We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also built a library where the old playground used to be. →We’ve built a new experiment building beside the old one and we’ve also set up a library where the old playground used to be. 常见高级写作词汇必备 1．第一first→to begin/start with 2．第二second→in