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　　本信较长，是个颇极端的例子。由于原作者坚持要写满一页，所以改后稿也甚长。其实这么多文字很可能浪费了。这样一封用于索取资料的信，目的仅是要对方对自己产生兴趣，然后把申请和介绍材料寄给自己。一般来说，这种信不必要太长，也不必太详细地介绍自己，更不必要设计与自己学术能力无关的内容。当然，也不要使用Dear Leadership这种话，听起来让人起鸡皮疙瘩。 Dear President and Leadership, My name is Tai Changle, I will graduate from Computer Department of Chinese Northern Industrial University this year. I would like to apply for further study as graduate student at your University. I took forward to your permission and reply. Here is my resume as following: I was born in Liaoyang city of Liaoning Province, China, in June 10, 1976. I studied at the Nanlinzi Primary School in my home town from September 1983 to June 1986, at the Provincial Testing Primary School of Liaoning Province in Shenyang City from June 1986 to July 1988, at the provincial Testing Middle School of Liaoning Province In Shenyang City from September 1988 to February 1992, at the Middle School attached at the Peoples University of China in Beijing from February 1992 to July 1994. Since September 1994, I became an undergraduate at the Northern Industrial University of China in Beijing. When I was 11 years old, I began to study BASIC language programming. In middle school, I kept on studying computer knowledge in my spare time, and won a championship at the competition of computer knowledge in which the students from all excellent High Schools in Shenyang City took part. In the last four years, I have learned the courses on computer systematically, including Discrete Mathematics, Fundamentals of Combinatorics Introduction to Mathematical Logic, Assembly Language, C Language, Data Structure, Compiler Design Theory, Operating System, Computer Architecture and Organization, Fundamentals of Computer Networks and So on. In the mean time, I took the TOFEL and GRE test. Last year, I got a license for drivers. My four years undergraduate life is very wonderful and meaningful, it has expanded my horizon. I long for the chance to learn more knowledge. ## is the best university in my mind