人教版英语选修六Unit 3 A healthy Life（写作）教学课件.pptVIP

Writing for Unit3 by Zhang Yan Learning Aims 1. To know what a good composition is like . 2. To develop writing ability by gathering, analyzing and comparing information. 3. To be more confident in writing and to be more cooperative through team work. What is a good composition? Ⅰ. Discussion Two compositions show 感知典型范例 字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。 poor What’s your conclusion by comparing two compositions? Discussion in groups Conclusion: What is a good composition? 1. neat and clean 卷面整洁 2. complete content 内容完整(要点无遗漏) 3. well organized 结构合理 4. exactly used and advanced words 准确运用词汇并使用高级词汇（语言） 5. proper linking words 使用恰当的连接词 6. various sentence patterns 句式多样 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友John写信告诉你近日由于沉迷于电脑游戏，健康受到很大影响。他十分焦虑。请你根据以下提示给他回封信，建议他养成良好的生活习惯。 1.限制玩游戏时间，把精力逐渐转移到其他事情上； 2.规定起床和睡觉的时间，形成良好的作息习惯； 3.每天锻炼半小时，增强体质。 Ⅱ. Pre-writing 注意：1.?词数120左右。 2.?可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.?开头语已为你写好。 Dear John, ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________ ______________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua Ⅱ.Pre-writing (team work) Task 1: Decide the style, person and tense Task 2: Decide the structure Task 3: List the requiring points Task 4: Write down the key words and sentence patterns Task 1:Style(文体), person(人称) tense （时态） The first person The present tense Person: Tense: Style: Letter of suggestion Three-part essay Task 2:Decide the structure Beginning Body Ending Show t