高中英语复习写作讲评课《How to make our writing better》.pptVIP

高考禁用涂改液，修正带 vs 没有比较就没有伤害 书面表达评分最高标准 （第五档 21-25分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有的要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 How to make our writing more attractive? 一. 使用较高级的词汇和短语 Task3.让表达更精彩 1). This activity is greatly beneficial to us. of great benefit for the purpose of 2) Students’ Union held the activity to raise money for the charity. 普通单词 替代短语 like see use join cause support believe thank think…important be fond of / have an affection for catch sight of make use of take part in / participate in result in / lead to approve of / be in favor of hold the belief that be grateful to attach great importance to… 高中英语复习写作讲评课 Xiang’an Middle School 潘士春 Topic 假定你是李华，你班交换生Amy，这两天因身体不适，未能到校上课，请你给他写一封邮件。要点如下： 1. 表示安慰； 2. 询问她是否能参加下周六学校举办的足球比赛。 3. 邀请她下个月到你家共度端午节。 注意：1. 词数100字左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Amy, ________ （2017“合肥三模”） unclear 审题不清 inaccurate语言不够准确 too plain语句过于“平庸” 写作中存在的问题 Examine the topic again, and solve the problems below after discussion. 1. Style:（体裁）_______________ 2. Person:（人称）______________ 3. Topic:（话题）______________ Task 1. 重新审题 An e-mail The first/second person To show sorrow/invitation paras contents tense para1 para2 para3 Task 1. 重新审题 to show your sorrow best wishes invitations the simple present tense the simple future tense the simple present tense 童鞋，说好的分段呢？ 时态是关键 Task2. 错误纠正 单词拼写错误 1. Wheather you are convenient or not… 2. we can buy what we need at a low prize. 3. It can help us save money and also benefit our enviroment. whether price environment Some common spelling mistakes? colledge choise apear opnion benifit howerve technolog knowlege interst drogon college choice appear opinion benefit however technology knowledge interest dragon 主谓一致问题 There is two days when we don’t go to school. 2. I think Mary like to go with us next Monday. likes are 词性误用问题 1. This activity is of greatly importance. 2. I think it is my glad to join you.