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通过举例体现细节 1. 把抽象的概念具体到事例和数字，通过举例体现细节，可以让文章变得生动。 抽象的词汇容易使得文章变得干涩难懂，使得读者失去阅读兴趣。在适当的地方添加一些具体的数据、形容词、具体名词会使得文章变得丰满立体，容易理解。  Example 1 It is considered that a fair percentage of the samples receive from one of our suppliers during the preceding months contained a contaminant. Revised: We estimate that 60% of the samples received from Ramsort Chemucals last June were contaminated with 0.5% to 0.8% mercuric chloride.  Example 2 一般词：Much of a Cuban’s day is spent for waiting. 细节词：Much of a Cuban’s day is spent for waiting. People wait for taxis, for buses, for newspapers, for ice-cream, for cakes, for restaurant, for movies, for picture postcards.  Example 3 一般词：The garden is full of flowers. 细节词：The garden is full of flowers. There are lilies, roses, orchids and carnations, to name but a few. 2. 用具体词也是提高表达细节的能力的有效手段。 我们常常被训练如何归纳总结，如何将具体的内容抽象，抽象词的堆积似乎可以使得我们的文章显得所谓的“专业”，而事实上，文章的意义在于交流，过度的抽象会影响到作者的表达，也有碍于读者对文章的理解。因此，在英文写作过程中，要注意用具体的词汇来展现细节。  Example 抽象词：honor，glory, peace, freedom 具体词：cloud, car, smoke, bitter, scream Happiness? Happiness is a cancelled 8:00 class on a cold, rainy morning. Luxury? Luxury is the smell of leather upholstery in a new Ferrari. Panic? Panic is realizing that next Wednesday’s test is this Wednesday. In conclusion: 具体词比抽象词的表现力强，表达更有效。 文章贵在细节，美在细致。