2020届中考英语一轮复习---writing 话题Changes in our hometown教学课件 .ppt

Writing English Composition ---Changes in Our Hometown 湖北通城隽水寄宿中学 吴晓霞 Compare A with B, which is better? Why? Compare A with B, which is better? Why? 1.Which one is better? Passage A （ ）Passage B （ ） 2.Why? Because Passage is better at Layout ( ) Grammar ( ) Vocabulary ( ) Sentence ( ) Logic ( ) √ √ √ B 习作演练(15分) 请根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Hometown ”的英语短文。 过去 1.旧房 2.河水肮脏 3.步行、骑自行车上班 4.道路狭窄 5.居住条件差 现在 1.高楼 2.河水清澈 3.乘公交车、小汽车上班 4.环形路宽阔 5.居住环境舒适 个人感受 I’m glad to see … I think … 要求： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，词数在80词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿使用真实姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 Changes in Our Hometown In the past ten years ,great changes have taken place in our hometown. ____________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __ _ __________________________________________ 过去 in the past 旧房 河水肮脏 步行、骑自行车上班 道路狭窄 居住条件差 old houses dirty rivers go to work on foot or by bike/ walk or ride a bike to work narrow roads poor/hard living conditions now 现在 高楼 河水清澈 乘公汽、小汽车上班 环形路宽阔 居住环境舒适 tall buildings clean rivers go to work by bus or car/ Ride a bike or drive a car to work wide ring roads comfortable living conditions he 认 真 审 题 2.What contents should be written? 1.How many paragraphs should be written ? 3.What kinds of tenses will be used? 4.What linking words will be used? 5.How many words should be written? he 认 真 审 题 2.What contents should be written? (1)Introduction (2)Details (3) Conclusion In the past ten years , great changes have taken place in our hometown . In the past…… Now…… I’m glad to see…, I think … 1.How many paragraphs should be writte