《优化句子的四种常用方法-公开课件（设计）.pptVIP

谢谢！ 需要注意的是，我们在写作时，不要一味地追求复杂句型，能简则简，能用短语，就不用从句。在句式多样的前提下，尽量做到精练。 温馨提示: [例11]我到家后马上给他打电话。 [一般] After I got home, I called him at once. [较好] After getting home, I called him at once. [例12]我正在餐桌旁吃饭，一个人朝我走了过来，那个人戴着一顶黑帽子。 [复杂] I was eating at the table when a man who was wearing a black hat came up to me. [简明] When I was eating at the table, a man wearing a black hat came up to me. [综合练习]下面是广东2008年高考英语试题基础写作的内容，请用上面所讲的四种方法整合句子。 18. Shooting was originally a means of survival. It developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896. None were contested duri