《匆匆》译本比较和评析.pptVIP

于是——洗手的时候，日子从水盆里过去；吃饭的时候，日子从饭碗里过去；默默时，便从凝然的双眼前过去。  V1.Thus the day flows away through the sink when I wash my hands; vanishes in the rice bowl when I have meal; passes away quietly before the fixed gaze of my eyes when I am lost in reverie. 状语后置，主语只出现一次 复合英文习惯，整个句子紧密连接，层次感强，简洁 V2.When I wash my hands, my days wash off into my basin; when I am eating, the days vanish from my bowl; and when I am sitting silently, my days pass by my gazing eyes. 状语前置，主语出现了三次 按照中文习惯，死板地照搬中文的平行结构，拖沓 “翻译时并不是所有的平行或对等结构都要‘对等的’译过去，否则译文会变得邋遢又啰嗦，也不能表达出原文的深层含义”