初二英语写作教学.pptVIP

潘斌--华科同济医学院 初二英语课程 第二讲：作文写作精讲 作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇 字：工整、清楚； 词：不拼写错误；能适当掌握高级词汇； 句：不出现语法错误；句子要逐渐使用复杂的从句句型，为文章添彩； 段：段落内容有逻辑性； 篇：合理安排文章布局；要有逻辑与联接； 绝对好用的替换词 Good– wonderful, excellent, gorgeous, fabulous, amazing, magnificent; Important– significant, essential, necessary, carry a lot of weight; But—However, So—therefore, hence, Primarily, Firstly, one of the most essential reasons, to stress first Secondly, above from the first point, In addition Thirdly, Last but no least, In conclusion, to make a conclusion, to summarize… 举例 For example— For instance, to take ….as an example, to state a fact as an vivid example, 经典句型： 1、It’s said that… 2、No matter what/which/who/where/when/whose+从句 3、It is/was +被强调部分 +that (who) +剩余部分 4、It happened (chanced) that +从句=sb. Happened/chanced to do sth.= sb.did sth by chance 5、由as引导的非限制性定句从句/由where, when引导的定语从句 6、It +谓语+时间段 +before +主语 +谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句） 7、When/ So long as/ As long as/ Once +从句，+主句（从句也可放在主句之后） 8、No sooner + had +主语 +done…than +主语 + did 9、倍数表达句型 倍数+more than,倍数+as much as.. 10、形容词、副词、名词 + as/though + 主语 +谓语 +主句 句式多变化 要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。 （1）句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在句首，或用分词作状语等。 [原文] We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. [修正] Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. [原文] The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news. [修正] Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying. (2) 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。 ①强调句 [原文] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. [修正] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely. ② 由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文中的“所… …”，有很强的概括，如： [原文] We had to stand here to catch offender. [修正] What we had to do was ( to ) stand there, trying to catch the offender. ③ 由with或 without引导的短语。如： 　He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. ④ 分词短