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书面表达高分策略 ??? 以前,英语作文评分的依据是根据要点和语言准确度而定。但是从2001年起实行的高考评分标准强调了内容要点,语言的多样性、连贯性和得体性, 鼓励学生尝试语言表达的多样化和复杂化。因此要写成一篇较有水准的英语作文,除了要点和语言准确度以外,还必须在语用、语法结构以及表达的多样性和灵活性上有所表现。句子单一、缺乏生气的文章,哪怕没有任何错误也不可能得高分,相反,“有些许错误,但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”,给分档次仍在最高档(21—25分)。　　那么,英语作文如何才能得高分呢?下面我们从词汇到篇章结构来讲讲如何写出高分的作文。 运用较高级的词汇，闪耀得分亮点 较高词汇的选择和运用，不仅能为文章增色，而且能体现出作者综合运用语言的能力。在解答书面表达题时，尽可能运用较高级词汇是增添得分亮点的一个有效途径。首先，应明确较高级词汇并非都是指课本上从未出现过的词语，更不是在备考的有限时间里刻意去背大量的课外词汇。这里较高级的词汇，指的是那种能够化平淡为不凡，给评卷人一种与众不同的印象的词语。如：1.Li Hua likes to help others and he is liked by all the people around him.2. Li Hua is always ready to help others and he is popular with the people around him....,and he is well received by the people around him.因此，同学们应有意识地运用一些词组、习语来代替一些单词，突破普通用词的同（近）义词或反义词，有些是通过构词法变化而来的。以下是常见的一些运用较高级词汇的例子，请大家作比较。1.A new building is being built in our school. A new building is under construction in our school.2. This picture makes me think of those who succeed in poor conditions. This picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavourable conditions.3. It is our duty to use water wisely by recycling water in our daily life.It is everyone’s responsibility to make good use of water,such as recycling water in our daily life.4.We all miss you and thank you for what you did for us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.5. I advised him to stop smoking,but he didn’t take my advice.I advised him to stop smoking,but he turned a deaf ear to me.6. Our class is a happy family,which is made up of 22 boys and 18 girls.  Our class is a happy family,which consists of 22 boys and 18 girls.7. The mother, who loves her children very much,works hard day and night. The mother, who is devoted to her children,works hard day and night.8.I’m not free now,because I have a lot of work to do.I am as busy as a bee, because I have endless work to do.以上每组中的第二个句子运用了较高词汇进行表达，使句子的表现力得到加强。这些较高词汇并不复杂，同学们在进行书面表达的训练是有意识加以运用就行。另外有一类较高级词汇，由于他们难以记忆，因此常被忽视，但是掌握一些难度较大的词汇的用法，并将其运用到书面表达中，对提升书面表达的档次是很有帮助的。如：1. Yo