小升初英语课件：专题讲解 写作.pptVIP

我是一个快乐的小学生。上个周末我的活动可丰富啦！我把我上周末做的事情用英语记录下来了。你想看看吗？ 第一步：审题抓点 两天 活动写具体、多样 第二步：定人称、时态 我是一个快乐的小学生。上个周末我的活动可丰富啦！我把我上周末做的事情用英语记录下来了。你想看看吗？ 第一人称 一般过去时 人称：主要有第一人称和第三人称；如使用第三人称，需注意第三人称单数在一般现在时中的用法，动词后需加-s或者-es。并且在写作过程中需注意代词的格式。 一篇作文可以不止一种人称和时态。 第三步：搭建结构 1.使用时间词语衔接：如写过去时的作文：Last Sunday, Last weekend, My holiday等 作文标题示例 时态 时间结构衔接词 Last Sunday 过去时 in the morning/afternoon/evening... Last Weekend 过去时 on Saturday moring/afternooon... My Holiday 过去时 on Monday/Tuesday... 2.开头点题，结尾呼应 如： Last Weekend I was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning, ... In the afternoon, ... On Sunday morning, ... In the afternoon, ... In the evening, I ... I was very happy last weekend. 第四步：检查易错句型 检查作文中关于小学阶段所学的重要知识点的运用是否正确。 如：want to do, like to do, like doing, would like to do等。 Writing 假期是快乐的，去年暑假你们全家去了哪里？怎么去的？在那里你们都干了什么？请以“My last holiday”为题，根据提示写一写你去年的暑假生活，不少于5句话。 （提示词：car, ride a horse, go camping, eat fresh food, take pictures, buy gifts ... No. 1 审题抓点 假期是快乐的，去年暑假你们全家去了哪里？怎么去的？在那里你们都干了什么？请以“My last holiday”为题，根据提示写一写你去年的暑假生活，不少于5句话。 （提示词：car, ride a horse, go camping, eat fresh food, take pictures, buy gifts ... No. 2 定人称、时态 假期是快乐的，去年暑假你们全家去了哪里？怎么去的？在那里你们都干了什么？请以“My last holiday”为题，根据提示写一写你去年的暑假生活，不少于5句话。 （提示词：car, ride a horse, go camping, eat fresh food, take pictures, buy gifts ... 一般过去时 No. 3 搭建结构 开头点题：My family went to Qingdao last summer. 中间部分使用时间词汇或表顺序的词语衔接：On the first day, we went camping and rode a horse. On the second day, ... On the third day, ... On the last day, ... 结尾呼应：We had a good time in Qingdao. Can you write? No. 4 检查易错句型 My last holiday My family and I went to Qingdao last summer. We went there by car. On the first day, we went camping and rode a horse. On the second day, we ate fresh food. It was delicious. On the third day, we went to a park. My sister took a lot of beautiful photos. On the last day, we bought many gifts for our friends. Then we came back home. We had a good time in Qingdao.