英语专四作文培训(TEM4 Writing).ppt

TEM-4 Writing * ppt课件 命题作文满分15分，分五个等级，14分、11分、8分、5分和2分，可以酌情加一或减一分，但不得加或减半分 * ppt课件 专四作文评分标准  14-15分内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,句式?用词富有变化,有闪光点基本无语言错误. 11-13分?内容切题,完整,条理清楚,文章结构严谨,语法正确,语言通顺恰当,少量语法错误 8-10分?内容基本切题,完整,?条理基本清楚,文章结构基本严谨,语法基本正确,语言基本通顺恰当.少量严重错误,一些词使用不当. 5-7分?内容基本切题,完整,?条理不够清楚,教明显的母语痕迹.较多语言错误,许多词使用不当. 2-4分?内容偏题,不完整,思路混乱,语句不完整,只有少数句子可以理解,词汇拼写错误严重. * ppt课件 ①审题并列出提纲（约5分钟） ②开始写:（1）切题（2）干净（3）少犯错误（4）开门见山（5）闪光点（约20分钟） ③交卷前检查（1）拼写错误（2）语法错误等（约5分钟） * ppt课件 审题 December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in need. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?　　Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:　　The Benefits of Volunteering You are to write in three parts.　　In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.　　In the second part, support your opinion with appropriate details.　　In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. * ppt课件 写作 三段式作文各部分的主题句 在首段能有有气势的开篇句 注意中间拓展段和结论段的段首句和层次感，特别是中间段多用连接词 结论段工整，能恰到好处地变换句子来重复总结观点 书写笔记工整 * ppt课件 检查应注意以下几个方面: ①主语是正确的吗?（名词，代词，动名词，不定式，that+句子) ②谓语动词是一个吗?（每句话一个）这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗?若是在shall，will，must，may，can等情态或助动词后，用原形了吗?除了这个谓语之外的其它动词消掉了吗?（使用动词的非谓语形式） ③主语与谓语一致吗? ④及物动词或介词后，使用宾语的形式了吗? ⑤定语或状语的位置放的合理吗? ⑥从句的引导词使用恰当吗? ⑦单词有没有拼写错误? * ppt课件 最易错的句子 There are still many people think we should not take it for granted. As more and more migrants flooding into cities, more and more people begin to question the positive effect. Make For mental power is so important to us that our college should take its responsibility to change the situation. Recently, it has become a hotly discuss issue which is a best choice for us to learn from book. Whether we should buy books or borrow books from others? Aiming to ach