新目标人教版英语八年级上册《Unit 6 I m going to study computer science》写作素养提升练习试题.pptVIP

习题链接 写作任务 思路点拨 写作实践 写作素养提升练 UNIT 6 I’m going to study computer science. 全国版 八年级上 全国版 八年级上 假如我是一名画家，我就用手中的画笔描绘祖国迷人的景色； 假如我是一名建筑师，我就用创意勾勒出祖国建筑的宏伟； 假如我是一名音乐家，我就用歌声歌唱祖国美好的生活； 假如我是一名绿化工人，我就用双手为祖国增添美丽的衣裳……同学们！你的理想是什么？ 假设你是李明，你梦想成为一名医生。请根据提示，给你的朋友李华写一封邮件，告诉他你将如何实现自己的梦想。 提示：get excellent grades focus on ( 重 点 关 注 ) science classes (Science classes are required for medical schools.) improve my physical health 要求：1. 要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.不少于80词（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词 数）。 1. 谋篇布局：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。 2. 遣词造句：就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。 （1）当一名医生不容易，为此我要作一个计划。 It’s not easy _____________, so I will ______________ for it. （2）为了考上最好的医学院，我需要取得优秀的成绩。 To get into the best medical college, I need to _______________________. to be a doctor make a plan get excellent grades （3）我打算更加努力学习，以取得更好的成绩。 I’m going to __________________ so that I can ________________. study harder get better grades （4）我计划多做运动来改善我的身体健康 。 I _________________________ to improve my physical heath. plan to get more exercise （5）我打算尽全力实现自己的梦想 。 I’m going to __________ to make my dream _________. try my best come true 3. 巧妙衔接：利用连词，使句子意思连贯。 本文中，在叙述如何实现自己梦想的做法时，运用firstly, secondly, thirdly, all in all( 总之 ) 来使文章节奏匀称、紧致。 4. 连句成篇： Dear Li Hua, I’ve decided to be a doctor when I grow up. _______________________________________________ What are you going to do in the future? I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Ming 【品读范文】 Dear Li Hua, I’ve decided to be a doctor when I grow up. It’s not easy to become a doctor, so I make a plan for it. Firstly, to get into the best college or medical school, I need to get excellent grades. So I’m going to work harder to get better grades. Secondly, I’m going to focus on science classes because they are required for medical schools. Thirdly, I plan to get more exercise to improve my physical health. Most doctors work long hours, and it’s bad for health. So I need to have a healthy body. All in all, I’m going to