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* 把握组句技巧和用词原则 大学英语四级写作专项 一、组句技巧 1. 句子应紧凑连贯 要求：句子各成分之间要衔接紧密、连贯并富有条理。 关联词引导从句 并列句 分词结构 独立短语 插入语 注意指代、时态、语态、人称和数等方面的连贯和一致 例1 原句：Teenagers are pressured by school work and they are also encouraged by their peers, and under these, they resort to smoking, and sometimes they feel a little guilty. 优化：Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though they feel a little guilty sometimes. 例2 原句：The following ways can be adopted to improve our study efficiency. First, you should make a detailed study plan. 优化：The following ways can be adopted to improve