5月9日公开课--写出商务范儿.pptx

写出商务范儿;You are a manager in a large company. You have been informed that a member of your staff often arrives late for work. Write him a memo about the problem: saying how often the member of staff arrives late describing the effect on other staff suggesting what the member of staff should do about the situation Write 40-50 words. ;To: P. Jones From: Manager Date: 21 November 2002 Subject: Lateness Hi, Jones Nowadays you arrives late for work very often. I feel you may have particular reasons for it. But if you keep going your lateness, other staff in the office may be late like you .I’m worrying about it .How about considering of being more punctual? Thanks!;Thanks for your letter. I got it 14th Oct. I’ve sent a copy to comp HQ along with a memo about your financial situation. I’ve set a meeting for 3rd Nov at 11am to talk about another bank loan. So, please let us know if you can make it a.s.a.p.;Can you tell the differences?;You will write an email to your customer to apologize for the late delivery. The sentence for you to revise: I am so sorry when I heard your delivery was late, but I know it will arrive on Tuesday. Sorry again. ;Revised version ;商务范儿？ How？;BEC写作题型分析;考纲支招;Informal ;Informal ;The characteristics of formal writing ;Noun Phrases;Impersonal Language;Passives;思维模式的差别：中文多主动，英语多被动 委婉、正式、免责、丰富表达;Formal Vocabulary