托福独立写作高分开头怎么写.docxVIP

实用文档系列 文档编号：YL-SY-44473 第 第 PAGE 1 页 共 NUMPAGES 1 页 托福独立写作高分开头怎么写 　　一：引入话题　　首先确定题目讨论哪个方向的问题，然后以这个问题为中心，写一句介绍性的话。　　比如，Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People who develop different skills are more successful than people who develop one skill only. (你是否同意，越成功的人所具备的技能越多?)　　Undoubtedly, more and more successful people are developing a wide range of skill sets to maintain their competitive advantages.　　二：扣紧题目　　改写题目，点明论题。考生在这里要切忌抄写题目，此处所要展现的是用其他的表现形式，特别是一些相对高级的句型来进行对题目的同义改写，目的是突出考生的语言表达能力。　　There is much controversy over whether to be equipped with one skill or to master a variety of skills so as to achieve personal success.　　在对题目中所涉及的名词对象下定义时，建议大家从具体名词入手，尽量避开抽象名词，以降低自己构思难度。一般情况下，开头部分篇幅长度为40-60字即可。我们的写作还是要以理由段的论述为主，所以建议同学们不要浪费太多时间在开头部分。　　好的开头是高分的一半，托福独立写作开头常见错误　　1. 语法错误　　语法错误并不是开头段落里面所独有的一个错误。一般说来，只要开头有语法错误的，基本上文段当中也会有语法错误。而解决这个问题就要把语法知识梳理和巩固一遍。另外，值得注意的是如果作文的开头段就有语法错误，会给阅卷者以语言不好的印象，对于作文的得分会产生不好的影响。　　常见的语法错误有：主谓一致、时态、句子成分不全等。　　比如:　　many people believes that playing games is not good.　　students has too much homework to do.　　many people who love to play sports with their friends. (主句成分残缺)　　2. Someone的使用　　在开头段里，如果我们要提出正反方的观点，最好说一些人怎么样，另外一些人怎么样，而不是某一个人怎么样。　　Someone believes that … (某一个人觉得…)However, other people believe that(其他的人觉得)　　这个表达中，someone这方的观点显得好弱。　　3. 过于详细　　开头只是一个引入观点，给出下文走下的提示的一个段落，不需要在开头把理由写得过去详细，否则正文段的展开就会受到制约。最好把正文分论点都概括成词或者短语然后用一句话把所有的观点表达出来。　　如：　　题目：Some people believe that video games could inspire young students interest and make their study more efficient rather than distracting them and a waste of time, so young students should be allowed to play video games.　　开头：　　At recent time, some young people are fond of playing video games. They believe that video games could enable them not only to relax themselves but also can make their study more efficient. Nevertheless, from my perspective, I think that young students cannot make their study more efficac