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Different people have different opinions on whether technology is a blessing or a curse. As I see it, in the modern history of human civilization, technology has played an (essential)indispensable role and it has always been the first driving force of the prosperity of life and society, so I tend to support the idea that technology is mainly a blessing to us. Firstly, technology has made our lives much easier, a lot more convenient and fascinating than ever before. For instance, with the help of it, most of us no longer need to worry about food, instead we are provided with various types of food that not only satisfy our tastes but also are nutritious. Household appliances, (家电)computers, modern transportation and telecommunication have revolutionized our lives in different aspects. Whats more, technology enables us to choose before different alternatives such as diverse ways of recreation and education. Apart from the contributions technology has made to our society, it is also crucial to our economy. As technology develops, it creates opportunities, generates a great fortune and a large number of vacancies. Whats more amazing, it fulfils peoples dreams of becoming rich overnight. On the other hand, it leads to an ever-increasing level of productivity which gives rise to the ever-large quantities of goods and services that can expand consumption and boost the economy. Taking these factors into consideration, the benefits that technology has brought to us would no doubt outweigh the problems it has brought about, so I hold the firm opinion that technology is mainly a blessing for us human beings. 评语： 文章行文连贯，文中的连接词和过渡词合理，使得全文结构紧凑；能够准确把握长难句，达到长短句合理分配，同时文中句式变化多样，希望继续努力，再创佳绩；文章用词不错，能够熟练的使用学术词汇，另外作者在拼写方面做得很棒 1.1 Different people have different opinions on whether technology is a blessing or a curse. [搭配统计] 动名搭配 have_on...opinion 在语料库中出现过 40 次?? opinion 前面的动词分布 , have_on 后面的名词分布 have_on...view, have_on...feeling, have_on...judgment, have_on...