2016高三英语试卷讲评.pptVIP

1、Having a laptop is an award for freshmen, which will encourage them to study harder in the university. 2、It is convenient for them to look for information on the Internet whenever they want and wherever the are. 3、A laptop costs a lot of money, which will add financial burden to some families. 4、Many universities offer adequate computers to the students for use. 高分作文的特点： 注意体现（1全+5美） 一、要点全 二、五个美 1、外在美（字体、卷面） 2、结构美（段落、层次） 3、词汇美（词汇、短语） 4、句式美（长短句结合） 5、过渡美（句段的衔接） 本次作文的问题 没做到： 1）词汇美 2）句式美 Dear Tom, How are you doing? I know you are interested in the topic whether it is necessary for freshmen