雅思大作文写作课堂.ppt

写作练习 practice ? Many people use distance-learning programs( study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 63 2020/4/7 Common mistakes ? 1. enter college/university ? → receive university education ? 2. knowledge that is useful for work ? → job-related knowledge ? 3. learn knowledge and skills ? → acquire/obtain knowledge and skills ? 4. 职业技术学院？ ? → occupational technique school/ vocational school ? 5. advanced education ? → higher /tertiary education 64 2020/4/7 5 Star sentences ☆☆☆☆☆ ? Anyone can memorize facts and get on-job training, but not everyone can think and analyze. ? So While universities play a role in training people for the workforce, they primarily function as a place for training the mind. ? What most companies and workforces need are not robots, but creative people who can contribute ideas. 65 2020/4/7 改错 ? 1. With the development of technology in recent years increasing number of individuals prefer to self-learning at home instead of attending school. ? 2. In addition, the students are lack of a studying atmosphere. ? 3. So classes learning is suitable since students meet face to face rather than distance-learning which only have sound or image communicating. ? 4. Some individuals held that study at home cannot give students the advantages as well as learning in university. ? 5. However, if you study in Internet or material post, you can manage your schedule on you own and spend more time to consolidate your knowledge, which is more efficient and intelligent means. 66 2020/4/7 ? ② that 引导，修饰“物” ? 如何处置罪犯是所有国家和社会都需要面临的问题。 ? 原本需要人工花费数月时间完成的工作现在可以由机器人在几分钟内 毫无瑕疵的完成。 How to handle criminals is a problem that all countries and societies face. The workload that could take months to finish by manual labor now could be done flawlessly by robots in minutes. ③ 逗