墙上咖啡作文讲评.pptVIP

Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 4.0 Client Profile 17.1. Copyright 2004-2017Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 4.0 Client Profile 17.1. Copyright 2004-2017Aspose Pty Ltd. 贴在墙上的咖啡作文讲评 espresso cuppuceine Evaluadon onl. ith Aspose slides for NET 4o client P Evaluation only. Created with Aspose Slides for NET 4.0 Client Profile 171 Copyright 2004 -2017 Aspose Pty Ltd  Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 4.0 Client Profile 17.1. Copyright 2004-2017Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 4.0 Client Profile 17.1. Copyright 2004-2017Aspose Pty Ltd. 目 标 1.指出存在的问题,让学生找出自己作文的症结; 2.指导快速审题和构思技巧,增强学生作文快速审题 和构思的能力; 3.佳作共赏,提高学生对考场优秀作文的感性认识; 4.自我修改,学习写好升格作文; 步骤 评—导—析—改 Valadon only. ith Aspose slides for NET 4o client P Evaluation only. Created with Aspose Slides for NET 4.0 Client Profile 171 Copyright 2004 -2017 Aspose Pty Ltd  Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 4.0 Client Profile 17.1. Copyright 2004-2017Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 4.0 Client Profile 17.1. Copyright 2004-2017Aspose Pty Ltd. 【原题回放】阅读下面的材料,根据要求完成作文。(60分) 日,我和朋友在洛杉矾威尼斯海滩一家有名的咖啡馆闲 坐。一位先生走进咖啡店,点了两咖啡,然后指一指店内的一 面墙,对侍者说 杯贴墙上。”侍者恭敬地为他上一杯咖 啡。客人结了两杯咖啡的账走后,侍者在墙上贴了一张写着 杯咖啡”的纸条。墙上有很多这样的纸条,似乎这种方式 是这里的常规。这让我们感到惊奇和不解。 后来有天我们又在这个咖啡店里享受咖啡时,一位拾荒者 从容地走进来,看看墙上,然后说:“墙上的一杯咖啡”。侍 者以惯有的姿态恭敬地为他上了一杯咖啡,拾荒者用完后没结 账就走了。我们惊奇地看着这一切。这时只见侍者从墙上揭下 一张纸条,扔进了纸篓。至此,我们才明白了墙上“一杯咖啡” 的用意。 这则材料引发了你怎样的感悟和思考。请选择一个角度, 自定立意,自拟题目,自选文体,写一篇不少于800字的文章。 Valadon only. ith Aspose slides for NET 4o client P Evaluation only. Created with Aspose Slides for NET 4.0 Client Profile 171 Copyright 2004 -2017 Aspose Pty Ltd  Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 4.0 Client Profile 17.1. Copyright 2004-2017Aspose Pty Ltd. Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 4.0 Client Profile 17.1. Copyright 2004-2017Aspose Pty Ltd. 、评一我们存在的问题 ● 1.审读材料