Unit 3 Teenage problems 作文指导 牛津译林版英语九年级上册写作技巧.docxVIP

Unit 3 Teenage problems 作文写作技巧 一、话题分析 本单元的话题是青少年问题，这个题目比较生活化，一般使用的词或句子的难度不过大，文章体裁一般是书信，时态一般用一般现在时。 二、思路点拨 第一段，问候语。 第二段，引出话题，点明主题，用一两句话把问题陈述出来。 第三段，分析问题，解决问题，提出自己的想法和建议。 结尾，希望我的建议有所帮助。 有时候不只一个问题，此时文章结构也可以是： 第一段：问候语。 第二段：第一个问题，问题是什么？解决问题的想法和建议。 第三段：第二个问题，问题是什么？解决问题的想法和建议。 体重问题 第一段：Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. 第二段：You are unhappy with your weight, but you do not know how to change it. Many students of our age have this problem. 第三段：I think you should eat less and exercise more. Doing exercise is not only good for our health but also a great way to make friends. You can call up a few of your friends and go cycling on a sunny day. You can have a great time together. 结尾：I hope the suggestion will be helpful to you./I hope you think my advice is worth taking./I hope you think my answer is valuable to you. 学习压力问题 第二段：You also worry about exams. Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam, so you always feel stressed. 第三段：Why not talk with your parents about it? Tell them all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Let them know how hard you are working. 合理利用时间1 第二段：You like travelling, but you’re unhappy because you don’t have enough time and money to travel. 第三段：If you are really busy, I think It’s a good idea to go on a trip at weekends. Plan your time carefully, and try to do as much work as possible on weekdays. Then you’ll have more free time for a short trip, which doesn’t cost you much money. 合理利用时间2 第二段：You said you often stay up late to finish all your homework and do not have enough time for your hobbies. 第三段：Plan your day carefully. Make a list of all the homework you have. Then work out how much time you need to finish it all. This will give you an idea of how much spare time you have. The you can choose your hobby according to the time you have. For example, play volleyball if you have a lot of time, and listen to music if you only have a short time. 学习与爱好冲突 第二段：It seems that you spend a lot of time playing football.