5月5号书面表达如何使句子润色汇总.ppt

本节课任务： 1 、翻译一段文字。 2 、如何给句子 “增色添彩” ？ 3 、佳作欣赏。 一场暴风雪袭击了这个城市，不仅航班取消火车 也被耽搁。政府号召所有的市民和战士积极参加 清雪活动。况且，采取了各种紧急措施来营救被 困群众以确保市民生活尽快恢复正常。 A heavy snowstorm hit the city. Not only were all the flights cancelled but also many trains were delayed . The city government called on all the citizens and soldiers to take an active part in the activities of clearing snow. Besides, all kinds of urgent measures were taken to rescue the people trapped in the snowstorm to ensure that everything returned to normal as soon as possible. 如何给句子 “增色添彩”？ 1. 多实少虚 : nice 2. 短语优先： I cannot bear it. I want it. generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, creative warm-hearted. I cannot put up with it. I am looking forward to it. ３弃旧取新 : Ｗ e all have the same chance . There are more opponents. 1. 较高级词汇 possess opportunity exist 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。 1. Its very dangerous for the students to go through the traffic. 2. Students are risking their lives when threading their way among cars. 社会应加强对学生的交通安全教育。 1. The students should be taught more about the traffic safety . 2. And also it is of great use to strengthen the safety education over the students. 较高级词汇 (Exercises 1) 较高级词汇 (Exercises 2) 1.We all think he is a great man. 2. As a result the plan was a failure. 3. She went there in order to study music. 4. In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. We all of him . The plan to be a failure. She went there studying music. Our school twenty – six classrooms. think highly turned out for the purpose of is made up of 较高级词汇 (Exercises 3) 5. You can find my house easily. 6. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 7. Suddenly I thought out a good idea. Youll finding my h