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南瓜藤老师带你写雅思作文 雅思写作（8 月 8 日真题） 【真题再现】 Somepeoplewhohavebeeninprisonbecomegoodcitizenslater.Somepeople think that they are the best people to talk to school students the danger of committingacrime.Doyouagreeordisagree? 【思路点津】 这次的题目类型是常见的观点类，而话题类型则是社会话题中的犯罪类。题目当中出现 了绝对词“best” ，所以我们在写作时自然不能同意这一观点，而是承认其可取之处继而进行 反驳。 “有些曾坐过牢的人在出狱后洗心革面。一些人认为他们是教导学生犯罪的危害的最佳 人选。你是否同意这个观点？”最近校园暴力的话题频频被人们谈起，借此在开头段引入话 题后，首先承认以身说法的说服力很强，接着指出这种方法可能很难为大部分家长和学生接 受，提出其他切实可行的教育方法。 【范文示例】 Thefrequentcasesofcampusviolencehaveonceagainplacedjuveniledelinquency underpublicconcern.Whilesomepeopleassertthatex-prisonersarethebestteachers toeducatestudentsinthisregard,Ibelieveothermeasuresmayprovetobeevenmore effective. Admittedly,itisanundeniablefactthat ex-convicts playasignificantroleinthe prevention of juvenile crimes. Drawing on personal experiences, those released prisonerscanvividly sharetheirstoriesaboutthepainfulsufferings inthejails, the miserabledamagetothevictimsaswellastheirownfamilies,andthetortuousregret theyhavehadsincetheydaytheyrealizedwhataterriblecrimetheyhavecommitted. Compared with traditional lectures, these stories are bound to leave much more impressiveimprintsonthestudents’minds.Accordingly,thestudentswilldiscipline themselvesandavoidsuchdisastrousroadinthefuture. However, we cannot overlook the worries that some parents may have towards ex-prisoners. It is completely reasonable for parents to be concerned with their children’s safety both physically and psychologically. That is why arranging face-to-faceconversationsforstudentsandpeoplewithacriminalrecord mayseem somewhat inappropriate, especially those who have committed violent crimes, or worse, crimes against children. In contrast, policemen who always fight in the forefront against criminals and parents who function as the first mentor oftheir childrenmayplayabetterroleineducatingstudentshowtoobeythelaw. Inretrospect,ex-prisonerscancontri