小学六年级英语作文汇总总结.pdf

小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 My English Teacher Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山， 直接点题， 首先介绍了英语老师的姓名， 然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、 喜好、英语水平、 上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词 [ 组] ，以免写出一些错句子。写作 时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。 My Days of the week I ’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o ’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o ’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don ’t have to go to school on weekend, and I like going swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身 经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流 畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实 际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。 I can help do housework I ama girl. My nameis Li Ling. I ’min Class Three, Grade Five. I ’mvery helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事 情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。 小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得 太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。 My Village My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Nea