人教新目标版初中英语九年级全册书面表达专项突破如何写以“事件对人类的影响”为话题的文章素材.docxVIP

如何写以“事物对人类的影响”为话题的文章 【例文 1】 我们在生活中会经历各种各样的事情，如：赢得比赛或比赛失利；考试成功或失败；表演成功或失败；和 朋友吵架或和好；第一次旅行等等，请你根据下面的提示写一件让你难忘的过去事件。 提示： 1.2019 年 6 月 7 号星期五参加演讲比赛； 紧张得脸红甚至忘词；同学们嘲笑我；感觉无地自容 老师与我交谈：参与就是勇敢的表现，是勇于跨出的一大步 我意识到我所需要的是自信和充足的准备。 一．审题 体裁 话题 时态 人称  记叙文 以“过去事件对人的影响”为话题 一般过去时 第一、三人称 1. How to write an experience ？ How did you feel? Why? What An experience What did you learn from it? When wher 二．文章布局 开头 : 引出话题 I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Friday文章. 段 落结构 正文：事件详情 It happened...I gave a speech in front of the whole class;nervous;laughed at ;had a talk with me; brave 结尾：吸取教训 From then on, I will be full ready for every (speech) performance and perform it confidently. 三．遣词造句 ①词汇库 记得 remember; 经历 experience ；发生 happen；紧张 nervous ；不舒服 uncomfortable ；意识 realize ；勇 气 courage ；勇敢 brave ；表演 performance ；准备 preparation ；自信 confidence ；执行 perform ②短语箱 演讲  give a speech  ；嘲笑  laugh at  ；感觉 feel like  ；在 ...  前面 in front of  ；尽管 even though/if  ； 如此 ...  以至于 so...that  ；从那以后  from then on  ；做准备  be ready for ③链接句型 Sad movies make me cry. The movie was so sad that it made Tina and Amy want to cry. I still remember the bad day I have experienced was... It happened on June 7th, 2019. He felt like there was a heavy weight on his shoulders as he walked home alone. His mind wouldn ’ t stop thinking about what happened only just one hour ago. Peter ’ s feelings were written all over his face. Winning or losing is the only half of the game. The other half is learning how to communicate with your teammates and learning from your mistakes. 四．作文模板 I still remember __________ I have experienced was a Friday.It happened on _______________. I _________________in front of the whole class. I was so _______________that _______________. What’ s more, I even ______________________. My classmates all laughed at me. I felt like I was ___________________. ____________________________________________________________________________________________ . I  realized