(TEM4写作考前指导).pptVIP

TEM-4中，如何写出有效的分主题句呢? 分主题的结构：分主题=论题+具体观点(主旨的某一具体体现) 分主题是对主旨的发展。论题规定了“段落围绕什么展开?”只有把握住这个大方向，段落才不至于跑题。观点是分主题中至关重要的部分，它回答了“段落围绕主题谈了什么”，或“主旨成立的理由是什么?”例如，1996年TEM-4命题作文要求写出，大学生活和中学生活最大的区别，并说明喜好倾向及其理由。我们可以得到下面的分论点： 1. College life enables me to be an overall citizen： 论题 喜欢大学生活的具体理由 2. College life makes me independent in academic studies. 论题 喜欢大学生活的具体理由 3. College life is much better than middle school life. 论题 喜欢大学生活的具体理由 分主题写作妙招 1：为保证和主旨旬呼应，和其他分主题句的协调，可采用 “主旨的重复或变体+发展观点”的方法 如前所述，分主题是对主旨的发展，所以主旨的重复是必要的。例如，针对The best way to stay healthy”的论题，显然主旨应该是“The best way to stay healthy is sth，/to do sth.．”我们可以有如下的写作提纲： 主旨句：保持健康的最佳方法是均衡饮食。 分主题：(1)保证营养均衡 (2)可以美味、健康两不误 (3)容易坚持 COMPOSITION: We see advertisements on television every day. Some people think that TV advertising brings us benefits, but others dont think so. What is your opinion? Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic： A MAJOR ADVANTAGE/ DISADVANTAGE OF ADVERTISIN ON TELEVISION You are to write in three paragraphs： * * A.模板演示 【真题示例】 ① In the first paragraph, state just ONE major advantage or disadvantage of TV advertising. ② In the second paragraph, give one or two reasons to support your point of view. ③ In the last paragraph, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion. * * ①When it comes to advertising on television, different people will offer different opinions. ②Some people take it for granted that advertising on television can bring benefits. ③In their opinion TV advertising promotes consumption. ④However, others hold that advertising on television spoils their enjoying excellent performances. ⑤Weighing up two opinions, I think TV advertising benefit producers and consumers greatly. * * ⑥On one hand, it is an efficient way for manufacturers to publicize their products. TV is a medium, through which information can be spread quickly, vividly, and in a large scale. ⑦For example, when WaHaHa, a kin