定稿中考英语作文指导课件(79张 PPT).pptVIP

根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你的同学关于你们郊游的计划。 时间 星期日（７月１０日） 地点 人民公园 交通工具 坐公共汽车前往 出发时间 早上７：００ 到达公园时间 早上８：３０ 活动安排 上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐 下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相 返回时间 下午４：３０ .精品课件. * 要求：１、词数：８０个词左右；题目及文章的 开头已给出，但不算在词数内。 　　　２、表格中所列内容必须都用上，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 　　　 ３、不要使用真实姓名及所在学校名称， 否则答案作废。 Notice Good morning, everyone! I’ll tell you a piece of good news. We are planning an outing. __________ .精品课件. * Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句) We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. (扩展句) Let’s have lunch in a restaurant and join the English corner in the afternoon. (扩展句) If you would like to take photos, you’d better take a camera. (扩展句) The time to return is 4:30 p.m.. (扩展句) Please get ready for the outing. (扩展句) Wish all of us have a good time. (结尾句) .精品课件. * 点评： 本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文章围绕“Notice”这一主题展开，把表格所提供的信息陈述清楚，要点齐全。文章中语句简练，语句变化多样，有简单句、并列句和复合句，也用上了祈使句，过渡自然，结尾表明作者自己对这次郊游活动的祝愿，增强了感染力。 .精品课件. * 你叫林海（英文名叫Joe），你的朋友John发给你的电子邮件中提到了关于学校准备开办英语学习班的消息，你对此事很感兴趣，请给John回一封邮件，询问有关英语学习班的详情。邮件的要点如下： 1．对英语学习班很感兴趣。 2．希望可以练习英语，结识朋友。 3．问英语学习班的上课时间、地点、内容以及费用。 注意： 1．邮件要通顺、连贯。 2．词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计人总词数。 3．不能在答卷上透露个人的任何信息（例如具体的学校和姓名等），否则答案作废。 .精品课件. * Dear John, Thanks very much for the information about the English evening class.(主题句) It sounds very interesting to me. (扩展句) You know I want to practise my English and make some new friends. (扩展句) I think this English evening class will be helpful to me. (扩展句) Could you please tell me a little more about the class? (扩展句) When does it begin and how much does it cost? (扩展句) Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do you have any more information about what we will do in class? (扩展句) I’m looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possibl