2020-2021学年高一英语寒假提升天天练短文改错-Day-15-含解析.docVIP

Day 15 A 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Once there was an old woman. She had a lot of money. She was kind and generously. She always did something help the poor. At Christmas, she handed out food, that was made by herself, to the poor. She handed out a turkey leg but a potato to every homeless person he saw. The homeless people love her very much. One homeless men took out a penny that he wanted to give to her as for a gift. She felt good. She was determined to doing more, so she gave $ 50 with every homeless person she saw. B 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。- 修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。 注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 Health is of greatly importance for us. We need some common knowledges to stay healthy. Firstly, pay attention to the diet. We should eat lots of fruit and vegetables, and they are rich in fiber and low in fat. Dont have a lol of food what contains loo much fat, such as like butler. Dont drink too much coffee, too. Secondly, exercise was necessary. Regular exercise can help stop us get fat. People who do running every day usually have strong hearts than those who dont. Finally, form good living habits. We should sleep about 8 hours at night, and never work too late. Besides, stay away cigarettes. 答案 A 【答案解析】 1.generously →generous??? 2.something后加to??? 3.that→ which?? 4.but→and?? 5.he→she?? 6.love→loved??? 7.men→man?? 8.for去掉?? 9.doing→ do??? 10. with→ to 【分析】 本文是记叙文，讲述了一个老太太慷慨地帮助穷人的故事。 【详解】1.考查形容词。and是并列连词，连接并列的形容词kind和generous作表语，故generously改为generous。 2.考查非谓语动词。此处是动词不定式作目的状语，to help the poor “为了帮助穷人”，故something后加to。??? 3.考查定语从句。that was made by herself是非限制性定语从句，that不能引导非限制性定语从句，故that改为which。 4.考查并列连词。句意：她把火鸡腿和土豆分给每一个无家可归的人。句中a turkey leg 和 a potato是并列关系，不是转折关系，故 but改为